The theme of this passage is that you should always study/be prepared. (Choose either)
(Site your info) I recommend you use the line above the highlighted area, it makes more sense, it talks about what led him to failure.
The reason why Grant failed to get together was because he studied little and was given privileges and exemptions and he didn’t study/ wasn’t prepared. (Choose either)
You could change it up its pretty simple just take a statement and make it into an answer with a little of your opinion! I highly recommend you to practice this, its a great help for writing overall :)
