Which of the following might be added to the portion of “Shooting the Hooch” in which Allison falls into the water so that the dialogue shows Allison’s understanding of her skills in the water?


“I did it!” she called to no one in particular. She had found her courage to fight her foe, the river.


Allison screamed to herself, “Oh no! It has happened again. Who will save me this time? Help me, help me!” she silently pleaded.


“I can’t do this. The water is too deep! Where is my mother? She promised to be by my side. I want her to come help me,” screamed the voice in Allison’s head.


“I’m done,” Allison thought in her head. “I can’t reach bottom, and this time I will drown in the water. Why did my mother plan this trip and then let me drift off? I can’t do this.”