Which of the statements below is not an appropriate thesis statement for an academic essay?


In today's crumbling job market, a high school diploma is not enough education to land a stable, lucrative job.


Closing all American borders for a period of fine years is one solution that will tackle illegal immigration.


The subject of this paper is my experience with ferrets as pets.


Exposing children from an early age to the dangers of drug abuse is the best method of preventing future drug addicts.


Respuesta :

I would say it is “The subject of this paper is my experience with ferrets as pets.”

I would say this as this one is much more personal.. and the answer itself is pretty inappropriate and doesn’t have anything to do with academic and it’s not a thesis statement nor is it built like one, but as for the other ones they are more of a statement and a sense of “theme” that you can write an academic essay about.