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Read the sentence.

I work at the community garden.

Which revision most improves the sentence by adding description?

I like to work at the community garden because it has a multitude of things growing there.
Sometimes I work at the community garden since it is nearby and beneficial to everyone in the community.
There are plenty of vegetables, flowers, and plants at the community garden where I work.
The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden.

Respuesta :

The revision which most improves the sentence is: The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden. The answer to your question is D. I hope that this is the answer that you were looking for and it has helped you.

In revision the sentence which will most improves by adding description is, The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden.

What is revision?

Revision is way of reviewing or redrafting a text.

Because when improving the sentence by adding description, it crafts an idea and expresses the description clearly and well supports it. Revision also given a great meaning to the improved sentence.

Hence the correct option is, The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden.

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