2 Below is the opening to one student's response to the task:

Write a speech to persuade your classmates that their schooldays will be the happiest days of their lives.

Morning guys, I have been asked to talk to you about whether or not schooldays are the happiest days of our lives. I don't know about y'all but I think school's a waste of space. D'ya get what I'm sayin'? What's fun about horrible homework and terrorising tests? OMG, get real! Schooldays are seriously stressful.

This student is not writing appropriately. Improve this opening so the student informs their audience of their purpose in a more engaging way and uses a suitable register for an examination response.​